A plan is generated for Trill's stay at the police station.

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Trivia: I am in the real-life Carpenter Center on a semi-regular basis (though it's not actually as tall as I wrote it in this story, I don't think). Additional trivia: John Atwater is the real-life anchor for the local FOX network's 5PM news, or at least he was when I wrote this piece. And I realize Trill seems somewhat immature near the end of this chapter, but you try going for a while without moving in the third dimension and tell me how that goes, 'kay? I also like Ian and Trill's interaction early in the chapter, especially around the "what if I want to be feared?" line.

Comments and critique greatly appreciated.