Another one for
ractuswalks.
Here's his character Ractus as a bear. I'm not sure what's the story behind those heart-shaped glasses, but I'm sure it's something fun. :)
ractuswalks.Here's his character Ractus as a bear. I'm not sure what's the story behind those heart-shaped glasses, but I'm sure it's something fun. :)
Category Artwork (Digital) / General Furry Art
Species Bear (Other)
Size 733 x 899px
File Size 906.5 kB
This is a great image you did. I love how you defined the muscles with the outline and the digital paint strokes of the color tones.
The arm holding the bottle seems smaller in mass compared to the other arm. There are some other issues but they don't take away the detail you captured in the form.
Looks good, great job.
The arm holding the bottle seems smaller in mass compared to the other arm. There are some other issues but they don't take away the detail you captured in the form.
Looks good, great job.
Thank you for the compliment and the critique as well! :)
Originally I was worried that the arm resting on the ground was smaller than the other one, so I made it bigger. Guess I exaggerated a bit. If there are indeed some other issues, it would be help me greatly if you could point out some of them... I already know that the tail is positioned a bit wrong.
Originally I was worried that the arm resting on the ground was smaller than the other one, so I made it bigger. Guess I exaggerated a bit. If there are indeed some other issues, it would be help me greatly if you could point out some of them... I already know that the tail is positioned a bit wrong.
Sure I'd be happy to help out.
Well first off his forearm and hand on the glasses seems off. The hand seems smaller than the rest of the forearm. I would think the hand would have to be big enough to hold the bones of the Ulna & Radius in the arm, but it seems like the hand is dislogged from one of the two bones.
The wings seem okay, but try thinking about how the skeleton would be grafted to the shoulderblades. here it seems like the wings are seperate and are just strapped onto his back, I don't get the feeling that the wings are apart of his body.
The shoulder of his other arm (going down to the ground) is raised to high for the body. I would suggest try posing yourself for a pose like this and see where your shoulder goes and where your arm reaches. The shoulder of that arm should come forward more.
Again try posing yourself or find a little plastic model you can pose for reference. Don't use those little wooden men, they don't bend the way most artists would want them too.
I hope this helps you out.
Well first off his forearm and hand on the glasses seems off. The hand seems smaller than the rest of the forearm. I would think the hand would have to be big enough to hold the bones of the Ulna & Radius in the arm, but it seems like the hand is dislogged from one of the two bones.
The wings seem okay, but try thinking about how the skeleton would be grafted to the shoulderblades. here it seems like the wings are seperate and are just strapped onto his back, I don't get the feeling that the wings are apart of his body.
The shoulder of his other arm (going down to the ground) is raised to high for the body. I would suggest try posing yourself for a pose like this and see where your shoulder goes and where your arm reaches. The shoulder of that arm should come forward more.
Again try posing yourself or find a little plastic model you can pose for reference. Don't use those little wooden men, they don't bend the way most artists would want them too.
I hope this helps you out.
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