beautiful :)

Thanks so much Mr. Movie Star :3

Wow how are you doing? ^.^

Xan Steel

If you are asking me. I am doing well. Just been plugging away, talking to some agents and directors. Hope to get some good auditions soon.

how about you? :)

Good luck hun :)

Trying to to live and keep a roof over my head, and finding work is not very easy right now. Wanting to start my own photography Biz, but no bank wants to give out any loans right now. Thinking I may write the new prez for money since he seems to want to give it out to those that are corrupt and not give it back to the people.

Xan Steel

Gorgeous... but kinda hard to see...

That is pretty darn awesome.

You looking for crits on it? I do have one little suggestion, if you are. XD

Sure, go ahead hun :)

Okay!

It's the wings. I do wings a lot, and I've been vastly improving mine lately. Anyhow! The wings he has look like Halloween costume wings, pasted on his back. If he's supposed to be wearing costume wings pasted on, then ignore the following. XD

Anyhow! Real wings are shaped nothing at all like those wings. The wings you've drawn here don't have an "elbow", just a "wrist" joint, and instead of the primaries connecting to the "hand" and the secondaries connecting to the "forearm" you have all the feathers connecting to the "forearm". And because you're missing a wing joint, the whole thing looks square, and boxy, and thus fake, rather than real.

To sum up how wings are supposed to look, I will just link you to the BEST basic wing tutorial I've ever seen, it's helped me a TON.

http://nambroth.deviantart.com/art/Realistic-Bird-Wings-96309379



Anyhow, hopefully this makes sense and is useful.

Hey! Thanks so much! :) I've bookmarked that link and will use it in the future. :)

he doesn't realize what he's missing. ;)

lol Too bad it ended this way :)

I still say stick it up for auction. Get your money out of it.

I did. I only did a sketch and got $35. :) That is what I charge for sketches.

Really awesome sketch. I actually found you through a LJ post about this commission *ahem* Love your art!

Thanks so much hun! :)

looks great so far (aside the wings, but meh). looks like he can't find enough space for his hand up his pocket. damn modern-day clothes. XD
love the pose and the expression on a nice face. :)

No "so far." It's as done as it is ever going to get. X3

oy. it looked like some prelim sketch to me. :)