
silly RU there not a lot of room to fly in this small room.
Category All / Comics
Species Dragon (Other)
Size 1024 x 1456px
File Size 965.4 kB
well for this lil comic is just me but you can go here for one with mako>>>
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/14305382/
ENjoy^^
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/14305382/
ENjoy^^
I recommend a lake, surrounded by hills, you can set up a slide with a small ramp into the water, so while holding Ru up so he can get used to gliding and keeping his wings aloft. And he can land safely in said lake vs hard unforgiving ground. Once he gets the hang of the gliding, then start wing flapping
No navigator to find my way home. Unladen, empty, and turned to stone.
The soul intention is learning to fly. Condition: Grounded, but determined to try.
The soul intention is learning to fly. Condition: Grounded, but determined to try.
I really like this comic~! It's really relaxing to read (especially with it being my finals week, haha).
If you take a mild critique, I just wanted to say your panelling on this page was a bit confusing. Most of the time it goes (1)Top Left to (2) bottom [top] left, then to (3) right, as it seems to have been set up in your pages before this one. So it threw me off for just a moment when it went (1) (3) then (2), or at least that's the best way I made sense of how the dialouge and the action was going.
Other than that, again, I love it. Ru is adorable, and has so much of my love for a couple years now and such. And the way the storyline is going, it's simply sweet. I even want to show my little brothers this comic. (I'll have to when I can finish finals first, weh). I bet they'll love it!
Keep up the good work! ♥ Can't wait to see more
If you take a mild critique, I just wanted to say your panelling on this page was a bit confusing. Most of the time it goes (1)Top Left to (2) bottom [top] left, then to (3) right, as it seems to have been set up in your pages before this one. So it threw me off for just a moment when it went (1) (3) then (2), or at least that's the best way I made sense of how the dialouge and the action was going.
Other than that, again, I love it. Ru is adorable, and has so much of my love for a couple years now and such. And the way the storyline is going, it's simply sweet. I even want to show my little brothers this comic. (I'll have to when I can finish finals first, weh). I bet they'll love it!
Keep up the good work! ♥ Can't wait to see more
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