Ok guys more stuff for my Character Design class. This is the new and improved Spade that all you guys helped with in my journal. Thank you all!!! I hope this time he looks more like a cowboy ^^;
The girl on the right is Dusty. She will be another Character in my story. I have not really worked on her to much but tell me what you think of her :3 she’s going to be the comic relief kind of. Or more like Spades cheerful and care free side. She likes him but he doesn’t really like her so she is always bugging him and all that fun stuff. I would go into more detail about her because I really like her so far, but I have so much to do right now it’s not even funny. Looks like I will be staying up all night to night animating a stupid bouncing ball and drawing these characters expressions.>.<
Tell me what you guys think :3 I love asking you guys because you always give me good feed back X3 I will try to respond to your comments as soon as I can.
The girl on the right is Dusty. She will be another Character in my story. I have not really worked on her to much but tell me what you think of her :3 she’s going to be the comic relief kind of. Or more like Spades cheerful and care free side. She likes him but he doesn’t really like her so she is always bugging him and all that fun stuff. I would go into more detail about her because I really like her so far, but I have so much to do right now it’s not even funny. Looks like I will be staying up all night to night animating a stupid bouncing ball and drawing these characters expressions.>.<
Tell me what you guys think :3 I love asking you guys because you always give me good feed back X3 I will try to respond to your comments as soon as I can.
Category Artwork (Traditional) / Fantasy
Species Canine (Other)
Size 1000 x 660px
File Size 465.1 kB
Looking good! Spade looks undeniably Western now. The duster looks a lot more defined and nothing like anything that could be confused for a captain's jacket. The cuffs look a lot better, too, and just overall more detailed.
As for Dusty, she's undeniably a landlubber, as well. XD Definitely looks nice, and the heart-shaped nose is a nice touch. A bit of a drunky, eh?
As for Dusty, she's undeniably a landlubber, as well. XD Definitely looks nice, and the heart-shaped nose is a nice touch. A bit of a drunky, eh?
She looks great! Very nice job on her design.
This may sound like something small, but perhaps consider changing the style of her hat? I say that because in some respects, she looks a bit too similar to Spade, and that's probably something you want to avoid. A different hat would aid in setting her off a bit more.
But even as she is, I do like her.
This may sound like something small, but perhaps consider changing the style of her hat? I say that because in some respects, she looks a bit too similar to Spade, and that's probably something you want to avoid. A different hat would aid in setting her off a bit more.
But even as she is, I do like her.
This is even better. I just keep loving Spade's design more and more! Spade looks amazing, Now we just need to see Dusty's design all finished up. Her upper half looks all good but her lower half needs a little work. Might I suggest you swap out the chaps for something more feminine like a sideskirt? A sash or something? She's good for the most part but she need a few more things to make her appear more feminine. I don't necessarily mean deck her out like the stereotypical slutty cowgirl but she needs just a little more appeal.
Keep up the good work! I love to see it.
I was just wondering, does the bird have a name? He's gonna need one.
Keep up the good work! I love to see it.
I was just wondering, does the bird have a name? He's gonna need one.
She's cute. :) I like the card suits theme you have going here. I'm assuming that's a sawn-off shotgun you have in her hip holster. Not sure I've ever seen that before but hey, why not? xP And alcohol in the other holster? Real charmer. >P Looks nice. :) Good luck with your project.
Any more word from the furry hater?
Any more word from the furry hater?
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