aw, what's wrong with it?

Seems decent enough to me.

Looks good, you can really see the bustle and sense of activity.

I'd say you did a good job, actually!

What, you mean highlight only one character, then fit in a hundred bajillion behind the character, instead of just creating the illusion of numerical depth with random arms and legs justting out from every blank spot on the page, and I'm not sure what I'm saying at this point actually, but I'm going to keep writing. I honestly don't know why I'm still typing. Kay then... *post*