Decided to post the sketches of my half of my current trades so everyone knows I"m really working on them.

I really could use a bit of redlining help if anybody feels like throwing in their hand. If not. well, I guess it doesn't look too terrible xD (I worked damn hard at trying to fix the glaring errors, haha.)

Not sure what I'm gonna do with the background yet. Like, their sitting on something, maybe a fence or stone/brick wall or something? Any suggestions, I'm at a loss.

May try and add in a little opened valentine's chocolate box too, to complete it.

We'll see...enjoy teh sketch.

sumaru (left) is mine, Kao is  kaoala-s


EDIT: I got some redlining help from  jadedsilk so I have reuploaded the better version, refresh if you don't see any difference :3