random nitpicks:
only white hair with his bondage get-up
short/long black with red coat get-up
he misses the important white gloves with symbols
the coat itself is wrong lol

nice start, though! give the hair some shading to fit the rest of the picture, and make the body smaller to proportion with head.

hey i didnt ask if it was right its my own personal drawing and who are you to say wat i shoud do eh ??? mother fuka

1. No one is asking for such language
2. By uploading a picture, you're showing it to everyone. This is a public site, and as every picture on this site, is open to any type of comment, unless stated.
3. It was a suggestion. I wasn't telling you to change it. Know the difference before spouting off obscenities.

and lastly 4. If this was a personal drawing, keep it offline. Simple.

hey read the large message on my front page why dont ya and leard wat i thing bout people like you