That's a broad neck. Not somebody you can easily punch or kick into submission. Kick him in the groin... oh, wait, he's dead! What does he care?! Expression looks fine, intent and unafraid. Pose is similar to the other monk guy. I think you could use some different poses for them and more variety to the costumes. maybe his wrist things could become becept bands or a band from left shoulder to under his right arm. You could go a different way entirely and instead of having them dangling from his arms go through his arms. He's undead, he can peirce his body in extreme ways without problem. Good looking belt and pants with dangly thing in the front.

mmm...you re rigth....old fashion zombies share to much clothing...and styles....they should be more orriginal....XD