The freckles are really doing the business there. I like the way you've drawn the bridge of her nose, and her smile, and the way you've given her neck shape. Her shoulders look good, really sturdy and broad. The revolver is nicely done, and her outfit is superb, tight enough to show her figure, but still doesn't look like a slinky dress or anything else that's figure-hugging; it almost looks baggy, in a tight way. Very good achievement. Her croth and thighs are an attractive shape, and I think her shoes are cool. Lastly, her freckles again: yes.

If I have any critique at all, it's that her hands could be a little stronger. Also that you should erase properly. Although personally, I think it's cool that I can still see the first version, where she was wearing shorts, and carrying a big rifle - it's like two pictures in one!

Thankyou very much! I'm gonna go back and clean this one up a bunch, and colour it today. :D And yeah, i'm really happy with how the clothes came out, usually i draw them all skin tight and it looks weird.
Thanks for the comments, but what do you mean by her hands being stronger?

Natasha Radinov from Gunsmith Cats has strong hands.
Heavy-set, broad, even butch, but still somehow feminine.

Kate's hands are fairly normal. They look like normal hands.
That's fine, that means you're getting them right.

Ahh, i want her hands to look strong, i thought they did. :P

HOLY CRAP that's so good

Tell me what's so good about it without using the words "Butt", "Hamper" and "Crabgrass"