i think the thing that's wrong is something about the area of her pillow and right boob.. something about that looks strange to me but i'm not yet comprehending what it is. XD ( -yawn- )

love the catchiness of the female's eyes though :3 they're so pretty, make me think of amber. you're so good at shading smooth and soft!

Yes, you're right...but I can't figure out what exactly is wrong, so I don't know how to fix it...I tried to do something with it but it ended up looking even more weird. Hahaha I had to mess something in the beginning and didn't notice it in time. Maybe I will start over, I dunno...I kinda like this, even if it looks strange, anatomy-wise.

Thank you a lot! I enjoyed colouring her eyes the most hahaha...

awesome colors! I love it<3

I get sleepy from watching this... and warm. <333

You're right, something is not perfect here... maybe her arm is too long? Oh I don't know. Light? Composition?

It's going to bug me until I find out, you know?

She looks rather irritated, by the way... must be that cigarette XD.

I've got an impression that it's a little too short to be honest...something's off with the composition, that's certain, but I can't figure out /what/ exactly.

Hahaha if you manage to find out, let me know. I will greatly appreciate it :3

She's supposed to look like that ahahaha...

I love how you colored those eyes -,- So shiny and brilliant!

Well... besides the anatomy... things looke really stiff. That pillow looks way too firm... very firm. I know how hard it is, but you should try and have her "falling" into the pillows better. Make this look a lot more comfortable. That shoulder looks like it's resting on wood with how much it's being held up by that pillow.

I think -that's- what's wrong with it!

bravo, you saved me from staring at it for another ten minutes trying to figure it out. XD

Thank you for the critique =3.
I was thinking that these pillows are more...rigid or something...you know, like those leather- like ones, used more for decoration than sleeping...but even if it was the case, then their shape doesn't make any sense anyway hahahaha...you're right, I need to think more about stuff like that D:

Something's off with the composition too. I don't know /what/ though...

Errors aside (reallly the pillow reaction on the bodies seems to be the major one I see, and maybe her stomach showing either a minor indent or shadow where his head is, it's a very nice picture.

Hi five for a fellow artist of monkey's, apes, and the non-normal furry

Hahaha yeah...I need to pay more attention to stuff like that, I will try harder next time. Glad that you like it anyway, thanks a lot :3

There's nothing under the pillow at the bottom left, so it appears to be floating. And the right boob seems too small even accounting for perspective, and looks too off-centre. That's what I spotted; the pillow and off-centre breast are easy fixes, not sure about the size of the breast other than painting over it? I can't quite work out the background; are they against a wall, or is it deliberately abstract? Clarifying it (somehow) might help.

You nailed the faces and the pose, though, as well as the textures and lighting. It's a lot softer than some of your other pictures.

I didn't notice that bit under the pillow that you mentioned...how did that happen :/. I need to pay more attention to stuff before I upload them ahahaha...
I will try to do something with the breast, then.. As for the background- it was supposed to be abstract, yeah...I will try to do something with that as well hahaha...
Thanks a lot!

I don't know. I like it. It's very good-looking overall, the colors, the accents are nice. I don't think this work requires "fixing."

Nah, it has it's flaws...they need fixing. But I will probably end up starting over with this hahaha...glad that you like it anyway :3

It helps to shrink the image down to a thumbnail size and look at it.

I guess I can't see what you are getting at. And, I'm sure the things I'd what t change aren't the things you'd want to change.

Her left shoulder is totally disjointed.

Awesome piece though.

Yeah, huge tits right here, yep. :|

My lack of skills at drawing boobs MEANS NOTHING.

You, lack of skill drawing boobs? proposterous! haw tawtaw

I've lost my powers, Bryan. It's the truth :C

That's becuase you don't use enough life studies. :3