This is one of my better ones I think. My first submission here was my best, and, honestly, I think this ranks third. On the story scale, of course.
I do have some other stories brewing, but I might have to take a little break from writing. I just hope I can take a creative writing class next school year. Public schools suck at things like that.
Now, it isn't very pretty. This is only a rough draft, and I will take any advice to mind.