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And... done! This actually took me a while to write, but I guess that doesn't really matter since right now I'm just uploading older stories from my Deviant Art account. Anyway, I hope you enjoy this one! As usual, I welcome constructive criticism, and until next time, I'm Robert Dayson, signing off!
Category Story / Transformation
Species Owl
Size 50 x 50px
File Size 35.4 kB
I would like to piont out two things
First: I might be wrong but i dont think any owl with ear tufs has yellow talons and very few overall have ( most has bronwish/greyish or something like that )
Second: all owls have two fingers in front and two in back ( owl can shift one of the back fingers to the front but they dont leave them there for long )
I just want to share my knowledge as those are common mistakes ( also sorry for any mistakes i made)
First: I might be wrong but i dont think any owl with ear tufs has yellow talons and very few overall have ( most has bronwish/greyish or something like that )
Second: all owls have two fingers in front and two in back ( owl can shift one of the back fingers to the front but they dont leave them there for long )
I just want to share my knowledge as those are common mistakes ( also sorry for any mistakes i made)
I'm sorry but I was mistaken a bit about owl fingers :(
I'm probably gonna make a mistake again so heres link to my source (its not a long article)
http://www.owlpages.com/owls/articles.php?a=9
Sorry about that :(
I'm probably gonna make a mistake again so heres link to my source (its not a long article)
http://www.owlpages.com/owls/articles.php?a=9
Sorry about that :(
A coyote, an owl and a fox? Interesting trio! I think these girls might be in for many adventures in the woods which I would love to read in the future!
I think you describe the stages of each person's transformation very well and even keep the dialogue evenly-paced.
I'd like to read more transformation stories from you tackling other species like primates, reptiles, amphibians, rodents and ungulates (just for variety's sake).
I think you describe the stages of each person's transformation very well and even keep the dialogue evenly-paced.
I'd like to read more transformation stories from you tackling other species like primates, reptiles, amphibians, rodents and ungulates (just for variety's sake).
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