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It's HERE! The most difficult challenge for the Star since he arrived the city of Colmaton begins NOW. Will he survive? If he does, will he ever be the same?
MANY thanks to
vivavulpes , 
thecanidean and 
sam-gwosdz for allowing me to use their characters and helping me with writing this chapter!
Also, many thanks to
wolfrider , 
train , 
mrduhast for usage of characters, places and ideas. All the characters in this story belong to their respective authors!
The Star belongs to me.
It's HERE! The most difficult challenge for the Star since he arrived the city of Colmaton begins NOW. Will he survive? If he does, will he ever be the same?
MANY thanks to
vivavulpes , 
thecanidean and 
sam-gwosdz for allowing me to use their characters and helping me with writing this chapter!Also, many thanks to
wolfrider , 
train , 
mrduhast for usage of characters, places and ideas. All the characters in this story belong to their respective authors!The Star belongs to me.
Category Story / All
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File Size 43.5 kB
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Dang man, great chapter here. The build was excellent and the pacing was great. I feel bad for Chris Jones as in his mind he keeps making mistakes. I know he's just trying his best and he'll get the hang of crime fighting in this world. The capture of all the heroes, even to the Star, himself was riveting. Nicely done on all accounts and I can't wait to see what's instore for them all. I'm probably way off here. But, I'm thinking Kraven, the Hunter or Saw lol. Great chapter though.
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