nice pic. do you have mirc? you should come hang out on EsperNet, #WeenusRunsThisPlace

YESSS!! \(>.<)/

It may not be your BEST work; but, as you said, it AIN'T bad at all!! x3

I would say that it does the "heroic couplet" MUCH justice. The title is very appropriate as well. =P

Besides, your sonnets are always good no matter what! =D

Face it...it's your special ability! (o.o)

**Also, the last 2 lines of the 3rd stanza are PERFECT!! They really get you ready for that ending couplet. ^-^

*shivers to the sound of ending couplet* (>.<)

Yeah, jealous fire is a nice image.

And the dropping with the rising is wonderful contrast. Honestly, I had not noticed that.

"I spend my days distracting my desire"

This is my new favorite sentence.

!!! Wow

Hee....

Yes, you love alliteration, don't you?

wow...just wow....

"If only you had stayed, I could be free.
Instead, I long for moments not to be."

wow....

Yeah, that's what D-Tail said.