Still more work to be done, but a lot more complete since story boarding. Sorry for the notes on the pages, just little reminders for myself when I drop it into photoshop.

As for actual dialogue, there will be none. I am trying to work this like I did in a past project (cron12.deviantart.com/art/ambu…). I want to try and convey as much of a "story" as I can by using visual cues instead of just balthering on on and on with just mindless exposition. Any sound advice and criticism is welcome of course.

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