Charisma and rhetoric. It takes skill to come up with the right words to convince people to your point-of-view. So it is good you spent time to write this right. X3

Yess exactly!
The reason this page took extra long in particular is because I always write the text I want down in Dutch and then translate it later.
But there were a few words in the original sentence that didn't have an English counterpart that meant the exact same thing.
So I could choose between using the English words that were closest to what I wanted to say, but risking getting a vague sentence, or making a super long sentence that precisely says what I wan't it to say but wouldn't be as effective due to being too long D:

In the end I couldn't choose and decided to just scrap the entire sentence and just write something completely different xD
The last text balloon was the evildoer. It isn't at all what I originally was, but at least it still has the same feel to it I guess