
the world so broken, black as coal
but I've always dreamed to fly
the hope of future lifts my soul
as high as summer's sky
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There is definitely room for improvement on this one. It doesn't really even make sense now that I think about it but I wrote it to have good rhyme and meter, not much else.
Feedback is always appreciated.
but I've always dreamed to fly
the hope of future lifts my soul
as high as summer's sky
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There is definitely room for improvement on this one. It doesn't really even make sense now that I think about it but I wrote it to have good rhyme and meter, not much else.
Feedback is always appreciated.
Category Poetry / All
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