
"Rain, rain, come and play,
wash away another day.
Though I yearn to fly away
Shackled down my heart will stay."
wash away another day.
Though I yearn to fly away
Shackled down my heart will stay."
Category Poetry / All
Species Unspecified / Any
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Hey, thanks for the kind words. I kinda wish, in retrospect, that I hadn't been so candid with this poem, or perhaps I'd left this one sitting on the hard drive. But, part of being a writer is channeling both the good and the bad, so I went ahead tossed it up here. Hopefully it didn't end up spoiling someone's day.
Well, I appreciate it, especially coming from a fellow poet. I have a tendency to blunt my words when I feel they're overly negative. Glad to know that, even when I don't, it's not the end of the world. It sure feels that way sometimes, however irrational that feeling may be. >.>
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