Really great read. The imagery of Art's progression through the story can be felt and visualized so easily, like you're shadowing him in first person every step of the way. The changes also aren't too rushed to take away from the build up and the reader (at least it was for me), can really feel the emotions grip out of the text through the read, like you feel for Art. Amazing stuff and very fitting for a romance type of write. (Makes me question the crap I write now rofl).

Thank you very much! Like to hear things like this :) I try my best with my writing. I know my writing is not perfect but I atleast hopes its readable and offers some unique storys and angles :) I am sure you stuff is good as well! I will have to have a read through it when I get some time :)

Not a problem :D. I find it helpful giving other writers feedback on something I felt or admired when I read a piece, and this is definitely a strong work. It's a writing style direction I might try to emulate with my overly worded/descriptive writes lol because of how simple it seems to flow. It's very difficult to pull out emotions for a reader to connect with (getting that intangible feeling pulling them in or connecting with something), and you pulled it off I think with this short romance. Art feels very human when he goes through the changes, and you can feel for Natalia as she has to bring him over to her side as a bat, trying to make sure the transition doesn't overwhelm him and that he can learn to enjoy it while being with her. Once again, very well done sir ^_^ *golf claps*

Thank you very much :) I know the whole over wording things. I used to have problems with that and probably still do every now and then. Its all about writing and figuring out a style that works :) Still glad you enjoyed it :) I have more to come eventually :)

Heh heh looking forward to it Mr wolf ;)

This was a beautiful story, it was really cute how they accepted that they're both monsters but they still love each other, it made my heart melt...

Amazing work

Aw thanks :3

No problem ^^

That was a cool story and sweet ending to.

Thanks!