This song is older than me I think. But it's a classic. I don't think you quite have it right. some of the first notes are too flat. I don't play guitar so I can't really tell you what you are doing wrong. But I know music and I've heard this song about 3000 times. Metallica was about all I listened to in Jr. High. Would April be singing this song? I would love to hear this song sung by a female vocalist. That would rock so hard. There just aren't enough female metal singers. And yes I've heard a few good ones.

yeah I think that i am too i need to refine it a tad, and yah April will sing it, she is a VERY good singer

Well, you're not slaugthering it but you should pay more attention to the hammerings and pull-off's. It's pretty static at the moment (guitar has no emotion while playing) but you still can hear that it's metallica. ;)

Practice a little more and all should be fine.

yeah, thanks man! It was just a little run through since then i have looked up tabs and learned it. As for the emotion yeah it does seem kinda dry, i was mad or depressed or something, i cant remember but thanks for the criticism :)