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A quick short story for the 
Thursday_Prompt
I'll get a nice thumbnail commissioned for stories later.
It is likely not among the best piece I've written, as joining the group coincides with some major venting that I needed to do and this story essentially recounts my current professional frustrations.
Nevertheless, critique is welcome from fellow writers.
V/R,
Mag.
Thursday_PromptI'll get a nice thumbnail commissioned for stories later.
It is likely not among the best piece I've written, as joining the group coincides with some major venting that I needed to do and this story essentially recounts my current professional frustrations.
Nevertheless, critique is welcome from fellow writers.
V/R,
Mag.
Category Story / Miscellaneous
Species German Shepherd
Size 80 x 120px
File Size 13.8 kB
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Thank you :)
Yeah, I was still quite aggravated as I wrote, as it had happened that day, so there was still a lot of "stream of consciousness", and not a lot of refinement in this piece.
Hopefully next Thursday I'll be a bit better, and able to offer some better quality of work XD
V/R,
Mag.
Yeah, I was still quite aggravated as I wrote, as it had happened that day, so there was still a lot of "stream of consciousness", and not a lot of refinement in this piece.
Hopefully next Thursday I'll be a bit better, and able to offer some better quality of work XD
V/R,
Mag.
Thanks,
Unfortunately, yeah. One of my peers even had observed my aggravation, and the fact that I was scribbling hash marks down each time I got bumped into, and said that there were plans to re-arrange some of the desks on the other end of the room, so there is no longer a choke point in that area, so HOPEFULLY that issue gets remedied.
As for the pic of the doggo, thanks :) That's a Mayhem, he's actually a major inspiration for the Sona (color pattern), as while I've had German Shepherds my entire life, he's the first one I've raised on my own after getting into college. He's my best bud. Here's a couple better ones:
The un-cropped version of the thumbnail in which he disapproves of everyone's shenanigans: https://www.dropbox.com/s/8zkjzlaba.....19401.jpg?dl=0
And a couple without the cover, because expressions are important:
https://www.dropbox.com/s/a64oxcav2.....19390.jpg?dl=0
https://www.dropbox.com/s/1xsb79gxe.....82%29.jpg?dl=0
V/R,
Mag.
Unfortunately, yeah. One of my peers even had observed my aggravation, and the fact that I was scribbling hash marks down each time I got bumped into, and said that there were plans to re-arrange some of the desks on the other end of the room, so there is no longer a choke point in that area, so HOPEFULLY that issue gets remedied.
As for the pic of the doggo, thanks :) That's a Mayhem, he's actually a major inspiration for the Sona (color pattern), as while I've had German Shepherds my entire life, he's the first one I've raised on my own after getting into college. He's my best bud. Here's a couple better ones:
The un-cropped version of the thumbnail in which he disapproves of everyone's shenanigans: https://www.dropbox.com/s/8zkjzlaba.....19401.jpg?dl=0
And a couple without the cover, because expressions are important:
https://www.dropbox.com/s/a64oxcav2.....19390.jpg?dl=0
https://www.dropbox.com/s/1xsb79gxe.....82%29.jpg?dl=0
V/R,
Mag.
Different people thrive in different environments. Some people outright shine in the middle of chaos. But I guess most would like to do their work in peace.
Nice little bit. Didn't quite get into the world of the story, but that's probably a problem of completely my own. It's short, but what little there is, is rather well written.
Nice little bit. Didn't quite get into the world of the story, but that's probably a problem of completely my own. It's short, but what little there is, is rather well written.
Indeed,
My gift is not extroversion, so I tend to prefer quiet environments.
Well, in fairness, in this short story I was largely in a "stream of conscience" state, where I was less interested at the time to provide a full picture of the environment, characters, and what the situation looked like. I largely focused on the thoughts and occurrences, as that was what was largely on my mind since they were fresh from happening that day, and I was angry/vent writing.
As for length, yeah, they will tend to be rather short, as the prompts, based on the posting history, come out right around 1900 my time where I am stationed. I assume the prompt is meant to be read and the writing completed the same day, so my time is somewhat more limited to completing that task while I'm in Korea.
V/R,
Mag.
My gift is not extroversion, so I tend to prefer quiet environments.
Well, in fairness, in this short story I was largely in a "stream of conscience" state, where I was less interested at the time to provide a full picture of the environment, characters, and what the situation looked like. I largely focused on the thoughts and occurrences, as that was what was largely on my mind since they were fresh from happening that day, and I was angry/vent writing.
As for length, yeah, they will tend to be rather short, as the prompts, based on the posting history, come out right around 1900 my time where I am stationed. I assume the prompt is meant to be read and the writing completed the same day, so my time is somewhat more limited to completing that task while I'm in Korea.
V/R,
Mag.
Oh,
Thank you, very much I greatly appreciate the complement, particularly since I believe writing tends to largely be disregards in this fandom :) As I have time, I certainly will plan to write more, hopefully things are a bit longer and when I'm not completely flustered.
If you are interested, I do have a couple more writing submissions in things I've commissioned:
Forewarning, this one is based on a... incredibly sad event: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/19634664/
And this one needs a little fine tuning: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/19634664/
V/R,
Mag.
Thank you, very much I greatly appreciate the complement, particularly since I believe writing tends to largely be disregards in this fandom :) As I have time, I certainly will plan to write more, hopefully things are a bit longer and when I'm not completely flustered.
If you are interested, I do have a couple more writing submissions in things I've commissioned:
Forewarning, this one is based on a... incredibly sad event: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/19634664/
And this one needs a little fine tuning: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/19634664/
V/R,
Mag.
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