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Maybe the problem is Dom's expression is hard to understand in that square. He seems to be looking away from Alex like if he was ashamed of what he did before. I like the one you did with him last time in the showers. He seem to be immersed in his thoughts, confused and maybe feeling guilty. This one in the other hand lacks of the dept I felt on the one before. Is just my opinion and is not intended to be a bad critic at all.
I hoped for something more 'juicy' about Liam. If James talked to him I wanted to know how did he react and what he thinks about James and Alex having sex. He behaves like a nice guy but as I said their conversation about the T-Rex issue could have been interesting.
Hey. Some choices could have been interesting. Have you thought about making an epilogue with a compilation of what happens in the other choices?
Hey. Some choices could have been interesting. Have you thought about making an epilogue with a compilation of what happens in the other choices?
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