Nice

Thanks

I've been waiting to chat for a while and btw how's my request?

Yes, what was that again?

I'll pp u

I got the pp up on here Jex

Ok

Would you still like a critique?

Yes, I'd love that. I really wanna get better =3

No problem!
Note or would you like me to comment

A comment is fine

Ok! Overall, the piece looks awesome! I love the colors you've chosen, they're quite dynamic actually, the yellow and red go together pretty well. But one thing I think you should work on is your proportions/anatomy. NOW, your style doesn't need these to be 100% logical, (because art isn't logical), but the way you've drawn the feet on this picture make it seem as if he's standing on the sides of them, if that makes sense. Also, the way you've drawn his arm is a little odd, as you've tried to make it anatomically correct - instead of making a break the arm , try making it more bendy and cartoonish! It'll fit with your style alot more, since you do a good job using simple shapes to make up your pictures. I'm sorry if that made no sense, i'm awful at critiquing haha , (plus my art is horrific), but keep up the good work!

your art doesent look bad. not to me. thank you for the advice ill take it to heart =3