
Yahh..
I've been wanting to write a story about my favourite dragon Winter now for a while, but never really came up with a storyline... And I still haven't in this story!
Nothing special's happening, really. Just.. a moment between "you" (or me) and him, told in first perspective.
No matter how short it is, I hope you enjoy it. Feedback is welcome!
I've been wanting to write a story about my favourite dragon Winter now for a while, but never really came up with a storyline... And I still haven't in this story!
Nothing special's happening, really. Just.. a moment between "you" (or me) and him, told in first perspective.
No matter how short it is, I hope you enjoy it. Feedback is welcome!
Category Story / All
Species Western Dragon
Size 50 x 50px
File Size 9.6 kB
I'm not a writer, so my opinion probably isn't the best, but...
Your story gives me a really nice feeling of the care and love between the two. I can see the bond they share and it's very sweet. You have excellent wording and descriptions to what's going on. I probably wouldn't consider it a storyline (as you said), but it is a beautiful moment and tells a lot of the two and their relationship. ^^
Your story gives me a really nice feeling of the care and love between the two. I can see the bond they share and it's very sweet. You have excellent wording and descriptions to what's going on. I probably wouldn't consider it a storyline (as you said), but it is a beautiful moment and tells a lot of the two and their relationship. ^^
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