So I recently posted a summary of this story, and I wanted to post a real preview of it. It's sitting at a good 37 pages total right now, but this preview is only 6 pages. While the book and the previously posted preview contain a sex scene at where this preview ends, I decided to offer a version without that scene, for those who aren't so much into that to enjoy it.

I'm posting it here like this because I'd honestly like some input. I've never written anything as long as this - not really, truly, determinedly written anything like this. So any comments and criticisms - I not only want them, but really, really need them, for preference.

I hope you all enjoy it, regardless of if you comment!