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Here is the short story which I paid with the writer Zanian when I belonged to WTFUR, in Montreal. For 2 years when I have an idea of a story which I would like to write, but I often blocked by the beginning (that is it still, especially for the central figure.. Sigh) but also, I have a problem with faults of syntax. Then, I asked for his help to develop the beginning of the narrative. Thus, the prologue. This is always in development and I can change things the prologue when one day, I would want to write my story, but this is a reference to help me to be situated. Now, I like that you to express me your opinions on this prologue and me said of whom you think of it. I want that you are objective. Thank you and good reading.
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