FA+
Shop
1905
Views
Views
33
Favorites
Favorites
Category
All / Fat Furs
Species Wolf
Size 786 x 1017
File Size 97.8 kB
Report this content
More from AFATWOLF
Dexter was one of the most feared titans in the vanguard, he'd claimed hundreds of bounties that was a threat to the light, the cities most feared creatures, God's even, he'd killed the devils servitor god, crota the son of oryx, the crazy skolas kell of Kells and even the taken king himself.
Dexter was on his next hunt now, a fallen archon from the house of winter, Braxis, a deadly, three story tall beast that terrorised guardian's on Venus, his job was simple, find Braxis, put him down, but Braxis was clever, like the former mercenary taniks the scarred, he liked stalking his hunter, so many traps lay ahead for Dexter, shouldn't be a problem.
Art by
the-b3ing
And the attempt of a story by me, let me know what you guys think and if you want try come up with your version of it, love to hear it
Dexter was on his next hunt now, a fallen archon from the house of winter, Braxis, a deadly, three story tall beast that terrorised guardian's on Venus, his job was simple, find Braxis, put him down, but Braxis was clever, like the former mercenary taniks the scarred, he liked stalking his hunter, so many traps lay ahead for Dexter, shouldn't be a problem.
Art by
the-b3ingAnd the attempt of a story by me, let me know what you guys think and if you want try come up with your version of it, love to hear it
Category All / Fat Furs
Species Wolf
Size 786 x 1017px
File Size 97.8 kB
Let's see here. I noticed a couple grammar mistakes, but that's to be expected. Everyone makes those. Other than that, the thing I would recommend is moving around some of you syntax. Some sentences were a little difficult to follow the flow of, if that makes sense. But other than that, it reads like a perfectly good bio for your Guardian. :3
Comments