Soaring Feelings: Scratchy and Reiky
Scratchy and
Reiky flying at sunset.You may recognize Scratchy from this picture: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/1096473/
Keep flying, together!
Category Artwork (Digital) / General Furry Art
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 659 x 757px
File Size 385.9 kB
Very explosive work :o You really work well with painterly effects! =3
I has critique: The waist looks turned awkwardly or uncomfortably, from there down to the foot, it's facing another direction but the foot says forward as the upper body does as well. The foot of the raccoon is to the side of his left foot right? If the lower torso is turned the way it is, pressing against the boxxors it gives an impression that the coon's foot in between the fox's foot but the foot is in between the legs which seems like it gives the sense that that's coming forward as well as opposed to just the side. I think you could actually keep the foot the way it is, but just re-adjust the fox's hips to work =3
I has critique: The waist looks turned awkwardly or uncomfortably, from there down to the foot, it's facing another direction but the foot says forward as the upper body does as well. The foot of the raccoon is to the side of his left foot right? If the lower torso is turned the way it is, pressing against the boxxors it gives an impression that the coon's foot in between the fox's foot but the foot is in between the legs which seems like it gives the sense that that's coming forward as well as opposed to just the side. I think you could actually keep the foot the way it is, but just re-adjust the fox's hips to work =3
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