This is my first submission in a while. It's a commentary on what's been swirling around in my head. All characters are mine.
Category Story / Abstract
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 120 x 120px
File Size 14.9 kB
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I found this small story quite lovely! It is an interesting concept: after all there has to be something that distinguishes adults from children and it is certainly not having a job or having "responsibilities".
It is remarkable the clear change of style between the yound child writing and the adult Gina describing her situation. It is not easy to clearly diferentiate the two styles while keeping it similar enough to be the same person.
I am so glad to see you writting again, Tay. You are a great writer and I really look forward to read more amazing stories from you.
It is remarkable the clear change of style between the yound child writing and the adult Gina describing her situation. It is not easy to clearly diferentiate the two styles while keeping it similar enough to be the same person.
I am so glad to see you writting again, Tay. You are a great writer and I really look forward to read more amazing stories from you.
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