That was a fun little story to read.

I guess that diving board will not hold my character Midnight also if she trid to get on it also. Because lat time i heard Tevy weigh around 900 lbs, and my character Midnight is not fat but very tall around 10'9, and she weights around 1100 lbs. So much for the deep end.


Any way love the story. Maybe you can wright another story with one of your fat characters and my character Midnight having some fun together, like a night at on the town. Going to a bar and sitting on a bar stoll and and with a little poll dance by Midnight and a stripper poll that is not ment for a girl of her size. Things like that.

Huh. Well, I'm really, really glad you like. It was a fun little exercise and a worthy cause. If you'd like to work with me, just, like, step into my office and look me up on AIM and we'll chill and figure something out. Thanks again!

Ok, i will see about doing that, because it sounds like a lot of fun.

Also it was the waterproof camera that does not belong in the story.

Wicked! And good stuff!

Hmm. Well, I'll keep hammering away and see what happens.

Umbrella

Aw, sorry. There was totally a drink umbrella. The correct answer was waterproof camera. Better luck next time, but thank you very much for playing! :D

Crap, I missed that. Granted the life guard certainly could have used an umbrella.

I don't normally find time to read written work here, but curiosity gave me a jump-start to look a this story. And I liked it - lovingly written with spot-on characterisation. Splendid.

Oh, and I love the "dedication" at the end, also!

Well, I thank you very much for finding the time. I'm real glad you liked it! For the epitaph at the end, I like to have fun with the format of my stories and play around with the medium a bit these days to make things a little interesting. Thank you!