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I <3 COMMENTS~ Thank you! Especially when a lot of work went into the Art~
I don't know why we stand here, ready to fight,
there is no reason, nor rule or law,
We will fight, to see our strengths,
and after that, probably play a video game...
Something I really just wanted to do, I started it, and BAM i finished it~
It took me like 3 days, 3 Fscking days XD
This was two sheets of paper wide, and a ton of work,
But I am SO FUCKING Proud of how it came out~
Practicing: Shading, Perspective, Backgrounds, Faded Colors (ex. ice and fire)
The whole thing was brought on, like most of my images of zeek,
by a comment he made, about how for range fighting, he uses fire and his board for mid range.
I wanted to draw this, and Fuck if I'm not proud of it~
Things I wish i could change:
- Add stop sign to sidewalk
- Shading OVERALL
- Ice effect
- Size of buildings
Zeek ©
zeekthelion
Feng ©
kitsunedark
Artwork © Me~<3
I don't know why we stand here, ready to fight,
there is no reason, nor rule or law,
We will fight, to see our strengths,
and after that, probably play a video game...
Something I really just wanted to do, I started it, and BAM i finished it~
It took me like 3 days, 3 Fscking days XD
This was two sheets of paper wide, and a ton of work,
But I am SO FUCKING Proud of how it came out~
Practicing: Shading, Perspective, Backgrounds, Faded Colors (ex. ice and fire)
The whole thing was brought on, like most of my images of zeek,
by a comment he made, about how for range fighting, he uses fire and his board for mid range.
I wanted to draw this, and Fuck if I'm not proud of it~
Things I wish i could change:
- Add stop sign to sidewalk
- Shading OVERALL
- Ice effect
- Size of buildings
Zeek ©
zeekthelionFeng ©
kitsunedarkArtwork ©
Me~<3
Category All / All
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 1050 x 817px
File Size 1.25 MB
I love how the sky looks.
The shadows cast by the buildings in the background should be more defined. The lack of shading on the buildings themselves makes them look kind of flat, too. If the sun's almost behind them they should be eclipsed and dark except for a little bit on the side facing the sun.
The little sidewalk thing to the side is kind of basic and there are some parts of the picture that are uneven (windows, etc). You should add shading to things even disregarding the shadows cast, like on the ground. Right now, again, it looks kind of flat. Also, on the shading on Zeek's clothes, his pants and shirt at least, the brightest highlight looks kind of... I don't know, plastic-y.
It might just be me, but aren't those doors/windows a little small considering the scale of the figures in the foreground?
Criticism aside it's quite good, and I hope I don't sound hypocritical given that I suck at shading/backgrounds/perspective myself. I'm not sure if you even wanted criticism in the first place, just comments... Oh well.
The shadows cast by the buildings in the background should be more defined. The lack of shading on the buildings themselves makes them look kind of flat, too. If the sun's almost behind them they should be eclipsed and dark except for a little bit on the side facing the sun.
The little sidewalk thing to the side is kind of basic and there are some parts of the picture that are uneven (windows, etc). You should add shading to things even disregarding the shadows cast, like on the ground. Right now, again, it looks kind of flat. Also, on the shading on Zeek's clothes, his pants and shirt at least, the brightest highlight looks kind of... I don't know, plastic-y.
It might just be me, but aren't those doors/windows a little small considering the scale of the figures in the foreground?
Criticism aside it's quite good, and I hope I don't sound hypocritical given that I suck at shading/backgrounds/perspective myself. I'm not sure if you even wanted criticism in the first place, just comments... Oh well.
Oh man, You are awesome! Criticism like this is the kind of stuff I LOVE!
It helps me understand where i fucked up, and I really appreciate it, honestly~!
Thanks, I'll keep all that in mind next time i do a piece as detailed as this~
You should stick around and criticize more often <3
It helps me understand where i fucked up, and I really appreciate it, honestly~!
Thanks, I'll keep all that in mind next time i do a piece as detailed as this~
You should stick around and criticize more often <3
I know...I fucked up the ice soooo bad~ Haha, but I was too lazy to recolor like 4 different layers to get it right XP
I knew the shading was fucked, maybe next time, maaayybe next time XP
Thanks, Don't be afraid to criticize, I can take it like man *Try's to look tough and fails*
I knew the shading was fucked, maybe next time, maaayybe next time XP
Thanks, Don't be afraid to criticize, I can take it like man *Try's to look tough and fails*
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