I've been meaning to post some constructive criticism here.

For starters, regardless of whether you click "drink it" or not, the narrative proceeds assuming you have.
I also didn't like the way you assumed the reader was, shall we say, male looking for male
From a strict story perspective, it was well written, flowed, and i couldn't find any seriosu grammatical errors. However, I thought the rabbit's response was too quick and unexplained, and didn't seem to vary when the choices changed

All in all, a pretty good attempt. You're close, but not quite there. Keep trying!

Thank you for the feedback. It is much appreciated. The main thing about the 2 current games posted (as well as the third on the way) is that they're more for demonstrating my work. I am also trying to find a balance in the creation. I am glad for your feedback