Hey everyone, I'm sorry for the long wait. I get easily distracted, plus I'm pretty busy finishing up my doctorate (graduation is a week from tomorrow). Here's the next installment of School Spirit. I changed up the ending of the previous chapter because I wasn't quite ready to go where it was headed. Lena's confined to her house during a rainstorm for the day and her changes are leading to some serious frustrations. This chapter is probably going to feel pretty slow, but I want to take my time with this story. I'm hoping it will set up some stuff for later down the line. Sorry there isn't more going on. I hope you all like it anyway.
As always, constructive criticism is welcome and appreciated. Let me know your thoughts!
As always, constructive criticism is welcome and appreciated. Let me know your thoughts!
Category Story / Transformation
Species Feline (Other)
Size 120 x 120px
File Size 304.8 kB
just went though all 3, i like this ' day in the life, living in the body' stuff going on, dont like how the dream suddenly turned things around, it kind wiped out all emotion, or i may of thought confused but then she dosnt think on the whole dream thing, & a lot of things were happening that she only had time to react to, and this got me going along with those feelings, but i think it's better to spell out even the confusion as an strong emotion as i was kicked out of the 'you are in there head' feeling you get when reading a good story.
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