
So i wrote this on fathers day, but i never uploaded it. Hooray me for bein dumb~
Basically just a person thing i wrote for my own sake, probably wont make too much sense to people who arent familiar with the inner workings of my OC, but yknow. ah well~
Daniel quietly unlocked the front door, then tip toed past the kitchen and down the hall to the first door on the left. Very lightly knocking, before opening the door anyways.
The room was decorated quite heavily with movie posters of every genre, over a pink and flowery wallpaper. The bed was lined with countless plush toys and music boxes with a little bunwolf hiding under his blankets. Only the blue eyes and small spike horns could be seen. "Trinity, its me." Daniel whispered.
Quickly the little one lept out of his bed, tossing blankets and plushies aside to grab onto the bigger wolf. Embracing him. "Daniel!" He squealed.
"Shh shh shh!" Daniel begged. Hushing Trinity with a finger to his lips "we cant wake your dad remember?"
Trinity lowered himself submissively "s..sorry Daniel.." He mumbled. But perked up as Daniel bent down to return the hug.
"Now. Come on. Lets get to work on his surprise" Daniel gently grabbed Trinity's hand to pull the smiling young hybrid to the kitchen.
Once there, Trinity immediately busied himelf by collecting all the necessary pots, pans, and ingredients that he could reach. Favoring the ones that let him stay close; Daniel collecting anything that was too high up for him.
"Alright. That every thing Trinity?" Daniel started to click on the oven top, while preheating the body.
Trinity nodded, pulling over a small step stool, so he could be a little more help. Organizing the ingredients Daniel needed from his own. Then started to mix up base of a cake.
Daniel looked over with a bright smile. Rubbing his hand over the little bunwolfs already messy bedhead, before starting work on a omelette fit for a king. "Thanks for the help Trin."
Trinity smiled and blushed softly up at him. "Of course!"
While dawdling away at their tasks, their ears perked to a door opening behind them. In soft panic of it being Rook, they both turned in unison to hide their surprise.
"Were gonna make your dad a nice big pie and-"
Toriel and Diala stopped suddenly to look at the boys, who already occupied the kitchen.
"Happy.. Fathers day?" Daniel said, a nervous laugh masking his voice
"Hello, Daniel" Toriel said, leaning upright, away from the still rather sleepy Diala. "What are, you doing here so early?"
"Uh.. I.. Was making breakfast and a cake for Rook." Daniel blushed softly, lowering his face. "Im sorry i snuck in.."
"Oh no, you are family. Think nothing of it. But, this does make our own plans difficult." Toriel stepped into the kitchen, after the boys relaxed. Monitoring their projects.
"Yea! We were gonna use the kitchen!" Diala stuck her tongue out defiantly. Only for Toriel to very lightly tap her nose. "We discussed this my child. That is not nice."
Daniel pondered for a second. "You have your fire magic? You could use that."
"Oh my, i havnt used fire magic in years, i couldnt possibly make a pie come out right like that." Toriel herself shyly blushed now.
"Ooh! I wanna see fire magic mom!" Diala beamed up at her with excitement.
Daniel also smiled to her "sure you can Mrs Luck. You used to do it all the time."
"Oh, alright." Toriel smiled at Daniel, and Rubbed her daughters head. "Help me get my ingredients, will you my child?"
"HAPPY FATHERS DAY!" Four screaming voices yelled, as they barged through Rooks door. Jolting both him, and Brinley, who had volunteered to snuggle Rook and make sure he went to bed for his suprise, awake.
Daniel, Diala, Trinity, and Toriel all pushing their way in. Carrying very fancy omelette with bacon, butterscotch cinnamon pie, red velvet cake, and a tall stack of pancakes respectively. All eager to give their gifts to the morning confused bunwolf, and his equally confused mother. "Daniel? Trinity? I didnt know you two had a plan."
"We didnt know you did." Daniel laughed. Everyone all taking a seat on the bed, to share in each others company.
Basically just a person thing i wrote for my own sake, probably wont make too much sense to people who arent familiar with the inner workings of my OC, but yknow. ah well~
Daniel quietly unlocked the front door, then tip toed past the kitchen and down the hall to the first door on the left. Very lightly knocking, before opening the door anyways.
The room was decorated quite heavily with movie posters of every genre, over a pink and flowery wallpaper. The bed was lined with countless plush toys and music boxes with a little bunwolf hiding under his blankets. Only the blue eyes and small spike horns could be seen. "Trinity, its me." Daniel whispered.
Quickly the little one lept out of his bed, tossing blankets and plushies aside to grab onto the bigger wolf. Embracing him. "Daniel!" He squealed.
"Shh shh shh!" Daniel begged. Hushing Trinity with a finger to his lips "we cant wake your dad remember?"
Trinity lowered himself submissively "s..sorry Daniel.." He mumbled. But perked up as Daniel bent down to return the hug.
"Now. Come on. Lets get to work on his surprise" Daniel gently grabbed Trinity's hand to pull the smiling young hybrid to the kitchen.
Once there, Trinity immediately busied himelf by collecting all the necessary pots, pans, and ingredients that he could reach. Favoring the ones that let him stay close; Daniel collecting anything that was too high up for him.
"Alright. That every thing Trinity?" Daniel started to click on the oven top, while preheating the body.
Trinity nodded, pulling over a small step stool, so he could be a little more help. Organizing the ingredients Daniel needed from his own. Then started to mix up base of a cake.
Daniel looked over with a bright smile. Rubbing his hand over the little bunwolfs already messy bedhead, before starting work on a omelette fit for a king. "Thanks for the help Trin."
Trinity smiled and blushed softly up at him. "Of course!"
While dawdling away at their tasks, their ears perked to a door opening behind them. In soft panic of it being Rook, they both turned in unison to hide their surprise.
"Were gonna make your dad a nice big pie and-"
Toriel and Diala stopped suddenly to look at the boys, who already occupied the kitchen.
"Happy.. Fathers day?" Daniel said, a nervous laugh masking his voice
"Hello, Daniel" Toriel said, leaning upright, away from the still rather sleepy Diala. "What are, you doing here so early?"
"Uh.. I.. Was making breakfast and a cake for Rook." Daniel blushed softly, lowering his face. "Im sorry i snuck in.."
"Oh no, you are family. Think nothing of it. But, this does make our own plans difficult." Toriel stepped into the kitchen, after the boys relaxed. Monitoring their projects.
"Yea! We were gonna use the kitchen!" Diala stuck her tongue out defiantly. Only for Toriel to very lightly tap her nose. "We discussed this my child. That is not nice."
Daniel pondered for a second. "You have your fire magic? You could use that."
"Oh my, i havnt used fire magic in years, i couldnt possibly make a pie come out right like that." Toriel herself shyly blushed now.
"Ooh! I wanna see fire magic mom!" Diala beamed up at her with excitement.
Daniel also smiled to her "sure you can Mrs Luck. You used to do it all the time."
"Oh, alright." Toriel smiled at Daniel, and Rubbed her daughters head. "Help me get my ingredients, will you my child?"
"HAPPY FATHERS DAY!" Four screaming voices yelled, as they barged through Rooks door. Jolting both him, and Brinley, who had volunteered to snuggle Rook and make sure he went to bed for his suprise, awake.
Daniel, Diala, Trinity, and Toriel all pushing their way in. Carrying very fancy omelette with bacon, butterscotch cinnamon pie, red velvet cake, and a tall stack of pancakes respectively. All eager to give their gifts to the morning confused bunwolf, and his equally confused mother. "Daniel? Trinity? I didnt know you two had a plan."
"We didnt know you did." Daniel laughed. Everyone all taking a seat on the bed, to share in each others company.
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clearly a real short story so i cant really be mad at the fact that you dont go into detail with the cooking but i mean... you could have somehow implemented a better transition to the "Happy fathers day"... it was like.. BAM... no transition, what if you had a new parahraph with something like they were covered in the ingredients and poor trinity burned his hand when grabbing a pan so fast, they crept up to the door and softly whispered "1,2....3!" an theeeenn get into it, over all the first part was cute but same complaint it felt... dry? idk something should have happened, things should have crashed in surprise to more impactfully show that they were super frightened and caught off gaurd, everything feels... mellow
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