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How it all began, a.k.a. The Dread Sisterhood of Wet Pants
Short inspired by Lysis, although actually written by me for a change.
Celestia hated being five years old. She hated being four, even - that was the time her parents decided she was too old for diapers - but recently she was scolded for wetting the bed every now and then as well in addition to being forced to use the potty when she was up. When her little sister, Luna, turned three and her diapers were replaced by the boring, thin pullups as well, Celly decided it was time to act.
On one fateful day, when playing in the living room with her little sis, she told her, "Lulu, I gotta plan. We gonna make mommy put us back in diapers!"
Luna, barely understanding what her big sister meant, but knowing that diapers were good, pullups were bad and panties even worse, nodded and listened.
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When the time for dinner has come, Mommy came to pick the girls up - and to her horror, found them playing in soaked clothes, an obvious wet spot, well more like a pool, on the carpet. When she asked them, "alright girls, who did it?" they both stood up, pointed at eachother, and simultaneously said:
"She did it!"
Unknowing to their mom, they had their fingers crossed behind their backs, negating the naughtiness of telling a fib.
Celestia hated being five years old. She hated being four, even - that was the time her parents decided she was too old for diapers - but recently she was scolded for wetting the bed every now and then as well in addition to being forced to use the potty when she was up. When her little sister, Luna, turned three and her diapers were replaced by the boring, thin pullups as well, Celly decided it was time to act.
On one fateful day, when playing in the living room with her little sis, she told her, "Lulu, I gotta plan. We gonna make mommy put us back in diapers!"
Luna, barely understanding what her big sister meant, but knowing that diapers were good, pullups were bad and panties even worse, nodded and listened.
*-*
When the time for dinner has come, Mommy came to pick the girls up - and to her horror, found them playing in soaked clothes, an obvious wet spot, well more like a pool, on the carpet. When she asked them, "alright girls, who did it?" they both stood up, pointed at eachother, and simultaneously said:
"She did it!"
Unknowing to their mom, they had their fingers crossed behind their backs, negating the naughtiness of telling a fib.
Category All / Baby fur
Species Human
Size 1280 x 1097px
File Size 532 kB
Very nice work, and I like the story it really adds to the image very well!
In terms of constructive criticism (per your journal since you're after some!) I'd say a good idea might be to use a larger image size for starters, so the image is less pixelated/higher resolution, plus I don't know if you use it or not but applying a "Smooth stroke" effect to your lines (or whatever it's called on your software, that's the name on GIMP) to automatically smooth out the curves - I know people like Denny use it even at their level of art, even though some people think of it as cheating it's really not, just making best use of available resources!! And maybe the pee should be a little more yellow, so more obvious kinda thing...
But definitely liking your work! :)
In terms of constructive criticism (per your journal since you're after some!) I'd say a good idea might be to use a larger image size for starters, so the image is less pixelated/higher resolution, plus I don't know if you use it or not but applying a "Smooth stroke" effect to your lines (or whatever it's called on your software, that's the name on GIMP) to automatically smooth out the curves - I know people like Denny use it even at their level of art, even though some people think of it as cheating it's really not, just making best use of available resources!! And maybe the pee should be a little more yellow, so more obvious kinda thing...
But definitely liking your work! :)
Well, the lines aren't done by software - I used an inking pen on paper to line out the sketch, then scanned it and colored it digitally. Check the rest of my gallery to see what digital sketches and properly linearted pics I make look like.
Still, thanks for the input, I appreciate it! :D
Still, thanks for the input, I appreciate it! :D
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