Thanks!

Not sure yet.

oh jeez. if this school has lunch integrated into the students' schedule, then i can't imagine how that would go at a vore school

also i'm not gonna lie: phrases like "the glutton he was," "he was very eager to devour someone," and "you may enjoy your belly until the end of class" made me cringe so hard. tbh it feels like the narrator has a bias or something, hmm

XD

Also, what do you mean by a bias?

sorry for being unclear. some of the phrasing and dialogue in the story feels really opinionated, like there's a bias toward certain characters and subjects. i know yuki is the main character of the story so there's supposed to be a focus on him, but the narrator seems to prefer him over other characters because of his tendency to eat people. there also seems to be an emphasis on weight gain, which makes sense for a vore story, but the references to gaining weight are thrown in so awkwardly that it feels uncomfortable

sorry if this doesn't make any sense. basically what i'm trying to say is that some of the ideas in the story (e.g. weight gain) make sense, but they're worded in a creepy and uncomfortable way

I see, so it's in the wording, how I phrase it. Okay.