
I made this poem for the Thurday prompt challenge of 28/07/2016.
The challenge was to write a story/poem about this artwork http://www.furaffinity.net/view/20663840/
(a big thanks to the artist for making this challenge possible)
I am open for critique, you can send me a note or just comment down below.
The challenge was to write a story/poem about this artwork http://www.furaffinity.net/view/20663840/
(a big thanks to the artist for making this challenge possible)
I am open for critique, you can send me a note or just comment down below.
Category Poetry / All
Species Wolf
Size 50 x 50px
File Size 38 kB
Awww, this was very sweet and I liked it a lot. Very well done I must say, and that last line was very awesome ;)
The only thing I would kinda like is if there was an explanation for the wolf waiting for time, but other tan that, I liked the poem a lot and I think you did a good job.
The only thing I would kinda like is if there was an explanation for the wolf waiting for time, but other tan that, I liked the poem a lot and I think you did a good job.
Btw, I saw you had no avatar and decided to make this for you using a real belgian dog:
https://docs.google.com/drawings/d/.....it?usp=sharing
What do you think? It doesn't fit the theme of peace and love or anything, but at the same time, I won't be offended or anything if you decide not to use it. I just made it because... I need friends and avatars take only five minutes to make in photoshop and I thought it would be a nice thing to do ;)
To download click File --> Download as --> .jpg and then upload it as your avatar on FA and that's it.
https://docs.google.com/drawings/d/.....it?usp=sharing
What do you think? It doesn't fit the theme of peace and love or anything, but at the same time, I won't be offended or anything if you decide not to use it. I just made it because... I need friends and avatars take only five minutes to make in photoshop and I thought it would be a nice thing to do ;)
To download click File --> Download as --> .jpg and then upload it as your avatar on FA and that's it.
Oh, but you prefer a jar of paintbrushes instead! You son of a...
Haha, just kidding ;) Yeah, I totally understand that it's not your style and I'm not offended at all. I hope you do find a good avatar soon though as it makes authors look a lot more professional when they have one and usually attracts more readers.
Haha, just kidding ;) Yeah, I totally understand that it's not your style and I'm not offended at all. I hope you do find a good avatar soon though as it makes authors look a lot more professional when they have one and usually attracts more readers.
Yeah, I suspected that was it, but perhaps there's a metaphor better than time that could display that message more properly because, at the moment, it's kinda vague. But again, other than that, I found the rest of the language very pretty and I think you did a good job ^.^ (That's right, I stole your emoji)
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