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Here is the introduction and first chapter of my "Marooned on Tashoo" story. I hope you'll read it and give me any comments you feel are appropriate and constructive. This is my first attempt at writing a full length story and I'm a bit nervous about it. I do hope it's well received.
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"A few minutes later, we were airborne. I flew east toward the Atlantic coast. At a cruising speed of about 725 kph, we arrived over Cumberland Island in less than 30 minutes. After making a legal low pass over Cumberland Island, I banked right and flew toward the St. Mary’s River sound. Then I made a circular turn, flew north just off the coast and the length of Cumberland and Jekyll Islands, on to St. Simons Island and then, after crossing the Altamaha River delta, I turned south-westward back toward Moody AFB."
Been there, done that - but it took a lot longer since I was on a sailboat. LOL In fact, my wife and I will be on St. Simons for a few days in late October. (Our sailing days are over.) That said, I'm hooked on the story and will finish it as I am able. As far as your story telling abilities are concerned, so far, so good. I'm going to have to limit my reading time so as not to interfere with my other obligations, but I promise you, I'll read it all.
Been there, done that - but it took a lot longer since I was on a sailboat. LOL In fact, my wife and I will be on St. Simons for a few days in late October. (Our sailing days are over.) That said, I'm hooked on the story and will finish it as I am able. As far as your story telling abilities are concerned, so far, so good. I'm going to have to limit my reading time so as not to interfere with my other obligations, but I promise you, I'll read it all.
Yeah, well that was defiantly a clue, but your Irma comments certainly helped narrow it down. (not to mention your name. ) One thing about "social media" is that if you want to maintain your anonymity, you have to keep your cards held close to your chest. I'll bet you can figure out who I am and where I live in about five minutes of looking. LOL When you do, note me with your findings. I don't want to advertise any more than necessary. LOL
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