Wow, this is was really neat, great way to show sequential storytelling.............. eeeeeeexcept for the very end. I know I'm nobody to talk, but I had a problem with feeling the reader's flow.

"Let's watch what happens"
And then the last panel comes, and I don't quite feel the flow. I had to look through the whole scene. It took me a while, but if there was a picture of Jeremy in shock over it falling down, or maybe even a picture of him pushing the barrel, then there'd be less confusion over what happened.

Sorry, I apologize. I'm nitpicking this, while I am genuinely impressed by what you've created here, seriously, amazing!

Thanks a lot for your input; I really appreciate it. I don't mind your nitpicking at all, because if you care enough to do so it can only mean you are genuinely engrossed by my work. High praise indeed.

Woah, took me 3 weeks, but I noticed that comment was not written as a reply, heh.

You do some great stuff. I really admire that!

His ears and face remind me of the The Reluctant Dragon a bit.
This was all great fun and I especially like the snake in the sleeveless shirt and tie.

The Reluctant Dragon must certainly be an inspiration for the way I draw dragons; I wore that tape out as a kid. However, I would point to a Popeye cartoon called The Hungry Goat as a stronger influence.

Well ain't that just typical. No-one pays any attention to you when you do a good job, but make ONE mistake and they prod your ear off about it.

Also, great way to show off the whol comic in an easy to read manner, it can be a pain sometimes to open a ton of tabs to see each page of a comic.

Do u have one for mobile friendly?

'Fraid not. I suspect that as time goes by, this comic and the others like it will only become more inaccessible as Flash fades into obscurity.

[cue "Dust in the Wind" by Kansas]

Nah this would be better for sad music. (Cues "How could this happen to me")

The sitting in the elevator is a nice touch!