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I was debating of what to have shown for the first panel. At first I was thinking of showing Lopu's somewhat surprised look on his face and his wound, but eventually I decided to focus on the instant regret on Lubo's face.
I also debated on whether Lubo's line in panel 6 should be thought or spoken. I can't remember if I mentioned this before, but Lubo's thought bubble text is black instead of dark blue because he thinks in this normal voice.
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Commentary:
I was debating of what to have shown for the first panel. At first I was thinking of showing Lopu's somewhat surprised look on his face and his wound, but eventually I decided to focus on the instant regret on Lubo's face.
I also debated on whether Lubo's line in panel 6 should be thought or spoken. I can't remember if I mentioned this before, but Lubo's thought bubble text is black instead of dark blue because he thinks in this normal voice.
Category Artwork (Digital) / Comics
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File Size 249.6 kB
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This is just a nitpick I always have, and I am just venting because I almost never get the chance (Because who really wants to deal with some big authors "Support line")Do not pay attention to the contained area:
I never got WHY someone says things they are about to do. "I'm going to change back now." I feel like the scene could have gone without that and he just changed. Makes a more "Non-Spoken" emotional field. The fact that people always just give it away just ruins what could have been even more emotional. Plus, it leaves me unsatisfied with a page or panel says something and leads it on to the next page. If he had stayed quiet, he could have changed back in that empty slot. Or even just not changed and left it with a hug. Happy end to the page, great!
*Heavy breathing* Now that I finished nitpicking, a pick-me-up so it's not left on a bad note:
Nice you kept the bleeding scar. Lots of people would lose consistency and just have it disappear!
I never got WHY someone says things they are about to do. "I'm going to change back now." I feel like the scene could have gone without that and he just changed. Makes a more "Non-Spoken" emotional field. The fact that people always just give it away just ruins what could have been even more emotional. Plus, it leaves me unsatisfied with a page or panel says something and leads it on to the next page. If he had stayed quiet, he could have changed back in that empty slot. Or even just not changed and left it with a hug. Happy end to the page, great!
*Heavy breathing* Now that I finished nitpicking, a pick-me-up so it's not left on a bad note:
Nice you kept the bleeding scar. Lots of people would lose consistency and just have it disappear!
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