Very nice ^_^

~N~

danka :)

heh, drool is fun. i find that adding those "bridges" makes it look real nice. they're supposed to hang like Catenaries. But it's possible to overdo it.. unless you're drawing slugs or tentacles :3

well, i didn't draw the picture, but coloring drool is suprisingly hard x.x

nah, just leave it clear, or a touch of white. don't make it yellow cuz it'll look like snot ;p

*chuckles* of course

well that was fast <^/.\^>;; LOL

That's one hell of a hello kiss. :D

yeah and those are some hella DSL's too

some people are just really friendly :)

Oooh, nice! I really like the subtle emphasis on Pika's shirt, especially in the back on the bottom there. It's pretty good at popping out, too, which is good.

Critique: More of a question. The circles and outlines inside of Pika's breast to our upper left, and the top of her lips in the lower right... I was under the impression that lineart indicated those were hard-shining light, and would almost be totally white. Like a reflection. Do I just not understand the function of it?

*thinks, tapping my chin* well.. i didnt really do the white on that, though i probally should have. But it'll be a think to keep in mind in the next pictures

I think Busty's breasts are even bustier (had to say it) then normal.

I remember a similar comic that went almost as quickly as this, I hope it turns out the same !!!

Great coloring job, I really like Kantai's clothin, can't quite tell if it's next gen Pokemon trainer or Sora's oldschool clothes, but I think it's Pokemon trainer since it would fit the story.

heh, we'll see

Nice job! XD I love it! You can color the rest of the comix, if you want! XD

thankies :) judging by how popular this one is, it will go over pretty well

hehehe wow! pretty forward ain't she...mmm hawt coloring lover too XD

thanks :) heh, yeah, just a bit, huh? :P

holy crap you colored this ? this is my fav comic XD

heh, yeah i did :P

holy lips n holy body!...sweet comic!