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Finally back to recording!
This a one-track/one-take like I used to do. I'm more eager to get new stuff recorded than I am worried about professionalism at the moment. I still think the take turned out pretty good ;).
Hope you guys enjoy~!
Lyrics
Let's talk politics at midnight
Before the rain begins to fall
We can kiss under the moonlight
Beneath the branches of the old oak tree
You, just you and me
We'll go walking by the river
Make an offer to the night
Burn tobacco for our mother
On the banks of a trickling stream
You, just you and me
You, just you and me
And when the sky ignites
With that amber light
When the dew drops fall
When sleep calls
In the still water I will lay me down
My soul won't leave this ground
We may be plagued by indecision
Never knowing what to do
Flying blind into the future
Like a wave upon the wine dark sea
You, just you and me
Raven trills and spirit beckons
And I must follow in their stead
The world is turning all around us
The heart will take us where our eyes can't see
You, just you and me
You, just you and me
Chorus
And as the time goes by
I'll be by your side
On the darkest nights
I can be your light
I'm your lantern, I will keep you safe and sound
My soul won't leave this ground
This a one-track/one-take like I used to do. I'm more eager to get new stuff recorded than I am worried about professionalism at the moment. I still think the take turned out pretty good ;).
Hope you guys enjoy~!
Lyrics
Let's talk politics at midnight
Before the rain begins to fall
We can kiss under the moonlight
Beneath the branches of the old oak tree
You, just you and me
We'll go walking by the river
Make an offer to the night
Burn tobacco for our mother
On the banks of a trickling stream
You, just you and me
You, just you and me
And when the sky ignites
With that amber light
When the dew drops fall
When sleep calls
In the still water I will lay me down
My soul won't leave this ground
We may be plagued by indecision
Never knowing what to do
Flying blind into the future
Like a wave upon the wine dark sea
You, just you and me
Raven trills and spirit beckons
And I must follow in their stead
The world is turning all around us
The heart will take us where our eyes can't see
You, just you and me
You, just you and me
Chorus
And as the time goes by
I'll be by your side
On the darkest nights
I can be your light
I'm your lantern, I will keep you safe and sound
My soul won't leave this ground
Category Music / Pop
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Size 120 x 120px
File Size 5.6 MB
If I may offer a small critique, the idea of the switch to the double ee rhyme at the end of each section of verse is nice, but when the rhyme scheme goes
ABACC
it can be a bit distracting and lose some of the wonderful flow you have going.
This is my opinion, of course and it is your music, so you can write it however you want.
The only change i would make is to add one extra line in the verse.
to make it ABABCC
I love love love the melody by the way.
ABACC
it can be a bit distracting and lose some of the wonderful flow you have going.
This is my opinion, of course and it is your music, so you can write it however you want.
The only change i would make is to add one extra line in the verse.
to make it ABABCC
I love love love the melody by the way.
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