Very well written, Raharu. In a way, reading his backstory remined me of when I read "Silmarillion". What I probably didn't understand so well was that if Atma actually still is trying to find and overcome his brother Ashenan to obtain his old powers somehow or if they are basically seperated in his lands. I understand that it must definitely be difficult for him to act even that none of the mortals really remembers him as part of the three devine Dragons. Though it seems unlikely that he'll ever get his powers back from Ashenan unless he'd actually need his brothers help at some point.

Also interesting concept about the soul link Atma and his followers share. It's like he inspires them while also ensuring they'd never try to top him off his throning position and always treat him with respect. Let's say that's surely convenient for him. <X3
I must also admit when reading about how heim having a big ego and being very respected by his followers, I felt reminded of Sinbad in a way(don't know if you ever watched "MAGI" XD)

I guess he has nothing to do with your Rattyself, or does he? =3

Mighty Sorry for the late response totobro, first of all i really want to thank you for commenting here :3 I rather appreciate it. I am not familiar with "Sirmarillion" but to answer the part where you where confused, Atma does still wishes to get his powers back somehow. I left it vague since its something I want to explain on his backstory, but basicallly his powers are sealed in such a way thats its very difficult for the seal to be broken. His brother Ashenan alone can't give them back.

I'm rather glad you enjoyed the concept of the soul link, that is more or less what I was going for with him when it came to giving others inspiration~ and jaja, i kinda see where you saw the resemblances x'D I am quite the fan of "MAGI", really :)

Indeed, Atma doesn't have much to do with my Rattyself, although it isn't unlikely that they could have met at some point :3

Do you got any other questions by any chance?

Hehe, cools! I can definitely recommend reading the Sinbad manga of' MAGI'. It's way cool! =D

Hmm, so far I think that was everything that came to mind. Did you want to tell me something you didn't write down here? =3