You do excellent faces. Can I borrow your brain for a little while? I'll wash it before I give it back and everything!

It started with Charles Schulz and a rather careful analysis of how he used minimal lines and dots to get expression. From there, simply looking at how other artists successfully conveyed expression and the whys and hows of it.

(thinking the unthinkable)

(thinking the unthinkable)

Ooh.

And yeah, yer expressions are amazing.

This is great work overall, and i do love that you are rethinking and trying to make your stories have more flow, but don't overwork yourself cause of it. You make this what Nick and Judy have seem so natural and progressive, just two adult mammals trying to figure out where their relationship can go, and what might entail.

I wish you the best of luck on your revision however and take care <3

Hmm... that second panel -- I could spot that as a   stevegallacci a mile away.

Not a bad read.