Beautiful.

Love that high slit dress!

Where is Albedo at on your site? I'm looking, but apparently I keep missing it

On the site is listed as just the Erma Felna EDF story, as that is all I can serialize, not having the rights to any other content

Thank you

Yaaaaaaaaaay Erma!

wait till you find the loincloth-kini you had her in

Classy!

This dress is remarkably attractive, for being such a simple pattern.

Oh, man. Lovely!

Love the gown, and cobalt blue suits her to a T!

Really nice!

Very lovely =0)

Lovely lass, and lovely dress.

She's beautiful!

Dance, madam?

Lovely!

Wait... so you are posting Albedo on your site?

I'm ever so slowly posting all the Erma content from Albedo , eventually all 500+ pages worth. Will finish Alone Together and eventually Birthright as well. AND, new Erma/Albedo material as I get it done. Looking to do a reboot.

While I HATE reboots, it's not like there is anything I can do to stop you.

And I'll check your site eventually.

Well, less a full on start over than a getting caught up and some loose ends fixed and some sharks un-jumped. The primary story will continue, but there will be some slight discontinuities with the original, mainly to undo the jump the shark bits.

Maybe you mean fixing some plot holes regarding earlier story lines, especially regarding


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Teka and her origins, since the way she appears in-universe doesn't have much sense if you take into account Erma's backgrounds.

Not sure of your objection? Erma would have been genetically sampled in her late teens to provide for Teka's creation, as the Net would have noted her growing potential by then.

Sorry if I didn't explain myself well, but I'm writing this in my cellphone because I'm not in home right now due to personal reasons and I was in a hurry.

What I was trying to explain is


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How Teka's family managed to get any sample of Erma's DNA since, as far I know, Erma never traveled to Teka's homeworld, so her family could get a sample of her genes, and what kind of relationship the Felna family had with Teka's one.

The Net arranged it.

I see, thanks for the answer.

Another plot point I suppose you want to fix, based from what you stated before regarding the topic is the whole thing about the


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Matter Conversion Cannon and how much powerful its supposed to be.

Yeah, I'm toning down how much output it has, and a matter of range, as it is not well focused, still crazy powerful, but as important, eliminate the runaway reaction aspect.

Beautiful, Steve. She's still one of my all time favorite characters. I appreciate your steering me towards this community. Despite some of the hurt It's brought me a lot of happiness, too.

We are englamored.

Feline Go Formal.

she is so beautiful...

V.