And finally, here is my long-promised second story!
I sure took my sweet time with this but at least now I feel like there has already been some improvement in my writing, also thanks to those who commented my previous works both here and on the FA forums ;)
Although I wrote it to be read as a standalone story, this is actually meant to be a continuation of this piece here, so check that one out too. And even if it is longer than the previous one, I plan to further expand this story in the future, making it a 3-parter.
Critique is welcome!
I sure took my sweet time with this but at least now I feel like there has already been some improvement in my writing, also thanks to those who commented my previous works both here and on the FA forums ;)
Although I wrote it to be read as a standalone story, this is actually meant to be a continuation of this piece here, so check that one out too. And even if it is longer than the previous one, I plan to further expand this story in the future, making it a 3-parter.
Critique is welcome!
Category Story / All
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 120 x 120px
File Size 12.6 kB
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