This is what was going to be the first chapter in an upcoming Star Fox fanfic that I have been writing on for quite some time. How ever, the overall layout of the story has changed much since I began writing this. So I thout I might as well put this up any way since the parts of the story may have changed but the story as a whole has not.

By the way, if anyone reads this 'outtake' could you give me some pointers on how to 'word' it better. The way one writes things out on paper is quite different than what most like it on the net. I would be very greatful.

Also(if anyone cares). The story will follow Krystal after she crash lands on earth during WWIII. Can she over come the major transformation that has been forced onto her or will the madness of the war claim another victim? only time will tell. The title will be Star Fox: Demon of the United.