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When a warrior goes bad, it spells disaster for all warriors of righteous hearts and the innocents they protect. Of course, there is such a warrior in us all, as well as another of a wicked heart. Still, anyone's choice between the two can be seen by a handful of divine wolves called the Langren, through the souls of these warriors. But as of late, they aren't the only ones exhibitting this power. Recently, one young Langren has passed the knowledge of his power to a circle of siblings, called the Infinitium Phox Guardians. However, one of these siblings is not so receptive to this gift, and now it comes to bite him in the tail; all six of them. This phox goes by Zenaku, who is about to find more trouble than even he bargained for, and that says much.
Zenaku, Zenora, and Zenium Infinitium ©
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Zenaku, Zenora, and Zenium Infinitium ©
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"Her beauty and power of electricity brought new meaning to the word "stunning." I LOVE IT XD
"At the end of the day, no Infinitium sibling would trade another for anything in the world." That's what family's for ^^
You portray those three even better than I do. Despite my stories you definitely give the appeal of Nora, the bashfulness of Naku, and the wisdom of Zenium. I love the way each talk, you did research into the slang too, making it more authentic. The end where the two brothers talk was touching and it sounds just like something Zenium would say.
Just wow in all honesty. How long did it take you to write this? What's your process?
"At the end of the day, no Infinitium sibling would trade another for anything in the world." That's what family's for ^^
You portray those three even better than I do. Despite my stories you definitely give the appeal of Nora, the bashfulness of Naku, and the wisdom of Zenium. I love the way each talk, you did research into the slang too, making it more authentic. The end where the two brothers talk was touching and it sounds just like something Zenium would say.
Just wow in all honesty. How long did it take you to write this? What's your process?
I don't really time myself. It just comes to me and I gotta put it on paper. Still, I've been reading the works in your gallery and I do all I can to capture the Zens and their essence, though I think I overdo it at times. I'm almost done with the second chapter, though it will extend into a third one eventually. Also, I got a completely free alternative to Microsoft Word called Kingsoft, so I can finally spot all of my errors, plus having my On-Screen Narrator read it back to me helps a lot too. I'm reading some of your earliest stories too, and the character Artemis really stands out to me. In fact, I'm already having ideas run through of where to put her in Cross Clash, as well as our rp.
Just be sure to remember that Artemis is not my character. Belongs to 
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I honestly think you capture them a lot better than I do by how much you've read about them. Can't wait to read the rest. Goin' on the site too!
On-screen Narrator? How does that work? And my earlier work? *hides* Embarrassing stuff from amaturish thinking
paxcervaI honestly think you capture them a lot better than I do by how much you've read about them. Can't wait to read the rest. Goin' on the site too!
On-screen Narrator? How does that work? And my earlier work? *hides* Embarrassing stuff from amaturish thinking
Maybe a little amaturish, but mine is no different. But don't lush about it, wear your earlier amateurism with pride. It's something to compare with what you do now, and show how far you've come. But most PCs come with an On-Screen Narrator app. Just look it up on your PC. All I do is activate it, highlight all the text of my document, and the narrator reads it back. Though, mine has peaked my curiosity when she pronounced certain names and I wonder how you would say them. Like the Zen family. Is it pronounced In-fih-nih-tee-um? Or In-fih-nih-shee-um, like the "sh" in t-i-o-n?
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