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So...The left arm is disproportionned in all points possible. The first part is short like a finger and the second is REALLY long.
The shadows aren't placed in one-angle-of light. I mean, some are on the left, others on the right.
For example: the ones on her bewbs and on her shirt doesn't seem to come from the same light.
To finish, I have to say you've got some problems in drawing feet.
How could you increase your level into these problems?
Give some effort in drawing anatomic sketches and bones. Then, use some rules of your own to remember how long is a member from one to another (hand slightly the same as the face etc...)
For the shadows, use an anatomic puppet and put a light on it and look during a few minutes to see how it goes.
For feet, I can share you mine (joke) but if you really wanna try to get it better, try to make a feet-sketch-book art and post it here, so people could critic it and explain what isn't good. Here, the position of the lines isn't good.
Except for all these, your picture is good, and I mean it. The coloration and the context are great. Thanks for sharing it! :3
i totally know what you mean about my shadows. i kind of just place them where ever i want, which is really bad of me :c and i'd love to argue that my feet are stylized, but i really can't. i actually am in a life drawing class, but i guess i've just been neglecting feet. i'll try to keep what you said in mind the next time i'm drawing<3
as for her arms though, they're both foreshortened, that's why it looks awkward. if the elbow is sticking out at you, the upper arm isn't going to be the right proportion, it's gonna look a little shorter. but i know what you mean, it does look funny.
as for her arms though, they're both foreshortened, that's why it looks awkward. if the elbow is sticking out at you, the upper arm isn't going to be the right proportion, it's gonna look a little shorter. but i know what you mean, it does look funny.
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